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作者: 雷．仲恩 時間: 2005-3-13 11:34 PM 標題: [不喜別看]無色幻影

無色幻影
神啊，容許我對您的猜忌，
容許我對您的試探
劃下巨大的叛逆十字
寫下鬼魂的竊竊私語
容許我把對凡世的憤嫉一一寫下
尤如黑暗海水中的異獸
在腐蝕之中找尋平靜
我來到寂寥的村莊
看到身軀腐朽有如枯骨的老婦人
緩緩而行
尤如踏步在深層的神聖地獄
瘴氣似的氣息環繞在她的四周
枯萎的四肢
在可惡的路上行走
她那些鬼劣的血親棄置她有如拋棄垃圾
誰人都不會可憐你是的是的
惡魔的喃喃細語
把我引導向黑暗的道路
反叛者作為神聖的核心
在祂四周的火點
乃是浮沈於塵世的罪人
在天堂似的地獄作樂生歌
凡世之人
追逐肉慾的幻影
撫摸女體的手被狠狠斬下
淫惡之人的舌頭該被勾下
無色的幻影
活在同性的情誼中
追逐那甜美的舌頭
那溫柔的玉手
終歸沈淪
擦下那叛逆的十字
我又被投於黑暗的塵世中

作者: joe198663 時間: 2005-3-14 03:46 AM 標題: [不喜別看]無色幻影

Your poem is meaningful...
I got inspiration atfer I read it...
No way to say about my feeling is...
So I just write a poem to respond you...

Dark Game...
''Little by little the warmth you left me with is going out
If it's gone completely, what will my body mean?
Seized with several impulses, I'm lost in a maze with no exit
The sense of reality urges me suddenly to find the way out...
But why can't I leave this place, so strangely?
I can smile naturally about this time tomorrow
As if nothing had happened...
I've always walked in such a manner
But I can't control this game as I wish...
The moment I say something
Everything may slip down through my fingers like sands
And I only wait the time passing by so calmly...
I need no makeshift words
Which I'll probably forget about this time tomorrow...
I had made this game a little longer than usual
No problem, I'll be able to find another one...
Please tell me that this pain is surely an illusion...
Please tell me that I'm not like myself at all now...
Please tell me, because otherwise, I'll yearn for your warmth again...''

Do you have any opinion for my poem?

作者: 雷．仲恩 時間: 2005-3-15 08:24 PM 標題: [不喜別看]無色幻影

下面引用由joe198663在 2005/03/14 03:46am 發表的內容：
Your poem is meaningful...
I got inspiration atfer I read it...
No way to say about my feeling is...
So I just write a poem to respond you...
...

證明我的詩還有一點感染力的^^，我們只是在找尋突破腐世的精神力量。

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