[原創文章]a peaceful night... Peace

joe198663

It is a peaceful night...
There are lots of stars...
As if to fill the gap between thick clouds...
They are shining like a prayer almost like a shout...
And my chest is constricted...

It was strange I felt so lonely tonight...
Only because you were not here...

On your peaceful face...
I layed a chain of white flowers...
Beautiful things are sometimes sad things...
I sense the farewell that has been long coming...

I break out of the black line and look upwards,
Thinking of the sky I once saw...

I find nothing I wanted in a place like this...
Which I escaped and tumbled into I rip my feelings off my heart...
And stick a smile on the mask...
Please take me away from here...
Before everything becomes a memory...

How far away will you go?
Is it so far away that you can never come back?

I want to see you but I can't...
At least you could tell me...
I won't forget any of the final tears you gave me...

I hope the morning will come for me soon...
Before I can't hide up my weakness...

Well, I know better than anyone else...
That a happy ending never suits me.......

vinzkarter15

I really really like your poems, it give me a kind of image in my mind, and every time I read one, it gives me a kind of cool feeling inside.

joe198663

下面引用由vinzkarter15在 2005/07/20 02:38pm 發表的內容：
I really really like your poems, it give me a kind of image in my mind, and every time I read one, it gives me a kind of cool feeling inside.

Thank you so mcuh!! ^_^
It is my pleasure to see your response...
Actually I just want to express my feeling...
I like to share my feeling with everybody...

I like to try to view my own and my friends' experiences objectively
And then I will put my honest feelings into words...
If I write when I am low, it will be a dark poem, but I don't care...
In fact I want to be honest with myself at all times...

To be honest... To be myself...
This is easy to say, but difficult to do...
Nowadays the world is full of greed and lies...
And most people just stand aside avoiding trouble...
But some people do strive toward their dreams and try to be themselves...
Such people shine and make the rest of us willing to support them...
Thus I want to use those poems as support...

Here is a poem for you...
I hope that you would like it...

What if you are alone...
And suddenly become blind,
And what if despite that you kept walking forward?

Come here, take my hand...
If you have only got one wing...
Even if I only have one wing left...

What if there was nothing to believe in,
And what if all that's left is despair?

Please, hear my prayers
In this era overflowing with wingless angels...
Let's fly together... together......

Fireex

下面引用由vinzkarter15在 2005/07/20 02:38pm 發表的內容：
I really really like your poems, it give me a kind of image in my mind, and every time I read one, it gives me a kind of cool feeling inside.

I agree with you, maybe this is the most beautiful part of the peom.
Just feel it and enjoy it.
Don't you want to give it a try?
Maybe you should try to make a peom too.

vinzkarter15

下面引用由joe198663在 2005/07/21 02:43am 發表的內容：
Thank you so mcuh!! ^_^
It is my pleasure to see your response...
Actually I just want to express my feeling...
I like to share my feeling with everybody...
...

yea i really like it too. please continue to write more new poems.  I really enjoyed it. =]

下面引用由Fireex在 2005/07/21 08:54am 發表的內容：
I agree with you, maybe this is the most beautiful part of the peom.
Just feel it and enjoy it.
Don't you want to give it a try?
Maybe you should try to make a peom too.

I tried to write some before, but is just too hard for me to find the right word, because I love to make my poem rhyme. I